I do not feel bad posting this:

So after I was done, I took a moment to feel that good, sleepy feeling you get after you come, and then I got on my clothes, waved bye, and was on my way.

That was a paragraph in a short story I am reviewing for class tomorrow. I really cannot look the girl who wrote this in the eye. It was such an abrupt statement within the context of the story.

Did anyone else laugh out loud once they realized what happened? I did.