What the Hell is going on here?
–A classmate’s critique of another person’s short story
What the Hell is going on here?
–A classmate’s critique of another person’s short story
Not the best feedback
Blog / Wednesday, April 1st, 2009
What the Hell is going on here?
–A classmate’s critique of another person’s short story
What the Hell is going on here?
–A classmate’s critique of another person’s short story
I like this person’s critical style; very concise.
Q, it was difficult to say much more about this this story. She had it dead on in asking ‘What the Hell?’ The story involved water being equated to magma and people eating scabs pulled off of someone to become immortal or something like that.
Hey Danny, when I try to open the comic from my RSS feed (from Firefox) it doesn’t load. Is that a problem on my end or yours?
It was on my side. I forgot to update the RSS with the new layout. I had made some changes that actually make the whole thing easier to code, but made it a pain to fix all of the old pages. I guess I missed one.
“What the Hell” says it best. Four stars to that critic.